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tell me what you guys think, and vote on what you want to have happen next!


hehehe i wonder if anyone made the connection with the new character and who he is.

Did anyone make the connection on who sails is? or do i have to explain it?
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no honestly I didn't figure out who sails is, but I like the story so on to chapter 5

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no honestly I didn't figure out who sails is, but I like the story so on to chapter 5

I need a terminator to shovel my drive way i got 6 inches of snow here
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ok then for the information on who Sails is.... watch the season final.... hes the resistance fighter that was following Barbara chamberlain...

so HA i made a connection to the series :P
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hey can i make a request outa my voters? can you post what you voted for? that way i know who's in on this and who i need to spam!
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Like the way the voting system for 'Member of the month' awards?
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yeah i just want to know who's reading and voting....
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I went for ambush! I see the surviving people ambushing them. I think the cities would be very much like Resident Evil: Extinction!

As for the story it self, this section was pretty awesome. I'm not trying to say that your writing sucked before, but Ch. 4 is a little different from the others. I like the way the story flowed in this chapter better than the others. All I'm saying is that your writing seems to be getting better as you go. That's just my opinion!
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I went for ambush! I see the surviving people ambushing them. I think the cities would be very much like Resident Evil: Extinction!

As for the story it self, this section was pretty awesome. I'm not trying to say that your writing sucked before, but Ch. 4 is a little different from the others. I like the way the story flowed in this chapter better than the others. All I'm saying is that your writing seems to be getting better as you go. That's just my opinion!
ACH lol... wondering when someone would make that comment... yeah my writing gets better the more i progress.... chapter 4 was something that i wanted to do for a while and i spent the full week on it (unlike most other sections). I looked over my previous stuffs, and they are all very... disjointed? yeah. so i spent extra time trying to make it flow a little smoother.
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ACH lol... wondering when someone would make that comment... yeah my writing gets better the more i progress.... chapter 4 was something that i wanted to do for a while and i spent the full week on it (unlike most other sections). I looked over my previous stuffs, and they are all very... disjointed? yeah. so i spent extra time trying to make it flow a little smoother.
Well I applaud you sir for a job well done.
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I second that I enjoyed reading it , 2 or 3 times now and of course I voted for ambush more action the better in my book.....!


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