wow that last one was a huge one.... 11000 characters. .. the forum was hating me because it was too long.... LOL

comments about the last section HERE and Vote for Chapter 3 HERE!

i have taken the liberty of making the polls a little more... vague :)

More vague... Now everyone is voting for that. The forum is loving it.

can anyone spot me a few comments? i just want to know what you guys like / dislike about it so far

I want them to meet some people who aren't obviously from the future!

last I read they were going deep in the bunker the section they didn't know about did I miss a section after that....great story line so far can't wait for more......!



I love it when a plan comes together.......!
op4rebel

chap 1 part 1was caravan,
chap 1 part 2 Wyatt getting knocked out,
chap 1 part 3 ending with explosion of a nuke device above ground.
chap 2 part 1 recovery, and wyatt self operation (the deap into bunker part
chap 2 part 2 "knocking", fight with t-70, Wyatt fatal wound, Resse bros head topside, T-70 explosion.

and thats it

was it really that obvious if you didnt know before had about the 'hang in their baby' and bar code?

FYI im changing tact... its going to be a full chapter a week... so you guys have longer to vote, and i can do some more in-depth connected writing (so its not so disjointed between sections.)

I AM surprised at the so far unanimous vote tho....

Thank you for using my idea, Chaoswolf.

What is your new avatar?

lol its a grue

what is a grue?

The grue is a sinister, lurking presence in the dark places of the earth. Its favorite diet is adventurers, but its insatiable appetite is tempered by its fear of light. No grue has ever been seen by the light of day, and few have survived its fearsome jaws to tell the tale.

Is he in a game or movie.