Just a suggestion regarding your best seller (which it will become someday )

Is it possible to collate it on some sort of way on the forum so that the chapters are in the correct order. I dunno, maybe post it in such a way that the thread is locked for other poster's comments, but rather that you have a separate thread where people can place comments about the latest chapter. You can start this thread as the poll for how the reader wants the next chapter to play off and then make comments about the current chapter.

Why am I asking? Just so it is easier to read/follow the story in the right order. You get dumb people like me who start reading a chapter and midway through, you realise that you lost the plot, cause you read it in the wrong order...

ps. Admins can delete this post after Chaoswolf has read it and either tell me to bugger off, or say, "good idea; lets do something like that..."

Ah man its people like you that make me want to write.... I agree that it is a little odd to have to do a jump around a lot for my story.... I'll create a story only thread and then ask teh uber admins to lock it from anyone but me (if thats even possible) The only downside of doing it like that, is that you get to see how badly i have connected the sections (hmm like a tv series)... here leme go do that

As to the notion of a quoted best seller.... that aint going to happen.. there are already so many conflicts between my stories and the information i have been able to dig up on the Reese brothers. And i just keep waiting for either the series or the T4 movie to do something that will epically destroy this thing and make it impossible to recover

Dude, don't let things like "badly connected the sections" get to you. Afterall that's the beauty if time travel and different time lines! You can always blend variations to your story in as new information becomes available. A quick example is the old TV series Dallas (still remember that?) where Bobby dies, after a season the makers realised their mistake, brought him back and he starts off in the shower and it was all just a dream Sue-Ellen had.

Besides its a story and as long as it stays within the "guidelines" of the movies and TV series you have a free hand to write it anyway you imagine it!

Point is, you're doing it because you enjoy it (...and 'cause you can!) and there is a lot more people that enjoy reading it that you would know.

Keep up the good work. It does get appreciated by many!

I like the Story I read it two or three times now I think its great just need more pages to read......@!!!!


good stuff keep it comming


I am glad you put it all together in its own thread thats simple and sweet THANK YOU


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Wow, a reference to Dallas! It is a good point though. I'm working on a story that I believe the 4th movie will contradict greatly but it doesn't matter. That's the joy of fan fiction, people can see how others interpreted the story itself and see different ways things could be done! Besides, it gives us here a little project to feel apart of!

more pages? im moving as fast as i can... RAWR 11 pages in a few days is a about as fast as i can book it without butchering it off of the little foundation i have managed to set up

i just don't want to move too fast and drop the quality through the floor

How many chapters are you aiming for?

as many s you guys are willing to stick around for.... i was thinking the ending might be somewhere around were Kyle gets thrown into century work camp with john.. and maybe a pick up afterwards or continue solo with Derek