Vote for the next section here!

I will post part 3 of chapter 1 in a few days.

don't forget to read:
Prologue / Chapter1 part 1
and
Chapter 1 part 2
before voting!

WoW over 200 views total for all sections :) IM happy :)

nice story so far chaos


i play a bit of chess if u fancy a game one day??

I enjoyed part 2 but I think its too short for weekly updates all I can say is more pages please...!

Keep up the good work...!


freedom isn't free ask any veteran.......!
op4rebel

yay got someone hooked ... im trying as fast as I can to put out sections, just takes time.... the last one was delayed due to the fact of my being sick for a bit, and the state chess tourney. It's also a bit slower since im writing this to your guys will, do if i write a detailed section and the vote goes different i have to do it again.

speaking of... yeah I'd be willing to play a game sometime soon with ya andy

The story is coming along very well, Chaoswolf. Have you read mine? Go to http://www.geocities.com/packmanworld click the image and then look for the link called "Terminator Fan Fic." Tell me what you think about the title especially!

the centurion work camp... ooooo 2021-2025... you have got a totally different style of writing from me... interesting... might have to take a few leafs outa your book

Thank you! I wasn't sure exactly when it took place but I figured that's when John and Kyle met!

Now here is my main issue..... right now i feel like writing a ton on the next section (6-10 pages worth)... and my problem is that one im impatient (i really want to be writing now), and two i don't want to offend you guys be circumventing the whole voting process....so im torn and at a loss... oh and i REALLY want you guys to be involved which puts two of my wants at conflict...

any ideas on how to fix my dilemma would be nice because right now I'm feeling like pounding my head into my keyboard....

Put the story in different parts so it won't be 6-10 pages.

Don't put up your stories, just type your guts out and save them. Then post them every week or so.

Write as much as you want and then, when you're done with that section, post another poll to see where you go next! Then you can keep us involved but still have control over most of the story!